New York: 1928. unbound. 2pp. 66 lines, with several holograph sentences added. Small 8vo, on The New Republic letterhead. July 16, 1928. near fine.
Wilson has been advising her on her writing and "was delighted to hear that the Bermonsey Book has accepted something of yours...You show a great capacity for learning....and when you finally do reach your mature expression, I believe it may be quite a rich one." He goes on to criticize other of her stories in great detail.